Post by MilesPrower on Jul 29, 2009 2:40:18 GMT -5
all right...here we go 
Miles sat on the couch next to Colitas and wrapped an arm around him. “What are you doing today babe?" Miles said. "Probably something after work, I guess" Colitas said. Miles stood up and looked for the remote for the TV. He found it between the couch cushions. He fell backwards onto the couch next to his friend again, and turned the TV to the food channel, Miles loved to cook, especially for Colitas. He's known him ever since the accident that brought them together. Miles mother and father died in a car accident on December first. The car that hit them was Colitas parents. Neither Miles or Colitas was in the cars. But Colitas wanted to find Miles so see what he went through after it happened. Since it took eight years, they moved in together. Miles was never able to tell anyone he was bisexual, except Colitas which he later learned he was gay. Miles quickly fell in love with him just from the way he talked and acted. "Doesn’t that look good?" said Colitas. "Yea..." responded Miles. He looked at the TV for the first time. He saw chicken grilled to a crisp drenched in teriyaki sauce. Nothing I couldn't make thought Miles. Colitas got up and said "Ok. It’s one thirty. I have to go to work." Miles stood and hugged him." I'll see you when I get back." When Colitas left Miles looked around thinking of stuff to do. "Well" Miles thought out loud “I have nothing to do till ten." Miles went into their room and pulled out a pair of jeans, a red shirt, boxers, and socks. He went into the next room and turned the hot water on. He had to stand around for about two minutes before he felt the water. He stripped off all his clothes and looked at himself in the mirror. “Not much here" he said. He felt the water again and adjusted it. He got in and began scrubbing himself down. The last thing he remembers was sitting down in the water and falling asleep///////////////////////////////End Chapter One.////////////////////////////////////// Begin Chapter Two///////////////////////////////////////// "Miles!" someone called "Miles!" Miles sat up water pelting him in the face. He quickly shut the water off "Yea!" he called. "How long have you been in there?" It was Colitas. Miles quickly got out of the shower and dried and got dressed. He opened the door. "Not long, why?" Colitas said "Well its ten thirty now..."”Whoa! I guess I dozed off then...” "Anyway" Colitas said "Something weird is going on...today at work I noticed a guy trying to bite his arm off behind one of the glass shields...Its freaking me out". Miles knew Colitas worked at a government testing site but that all. "Well" Miles said “Not much we can do here". "True" said Colitas. Miles stretched and yawned “Ok time for bed". Colitas said “Were you not asleep in the shower"? "I’m suddenly tired again, let’s go to bed." In the middle of the night a loud banging from the front door woke Miles up."Hey Colitas, do you hear that"? The banging continued. Colitas got up and opened the shotgun case in the closet. He always kept it loaded. The banging stopped right after that. Colitas stood quietly a few minutes "Ok, I think it’s gone." Colitas went to the front door, shotgun in hand "Hey, Miles" he whispered "come here and open this door." Miles counted in a whisper " three...two...one..." and quickly unlocked and opened the door in one motion. Colitas jumped through the doorway turning side to side making sure the thing that was causing the sound was gone. Colitas and Miles headed back into their bed. Miles scooted closer to Colitas. He tugged on his collar. “Hey! Cut that out” said Colitas. “Sorry” mumbled Miles.” Just try to get some sleep, ok?” said Colitas. Miles moved away from Colitas and looked at him. He looked like he was trying to piece something together. “Colitas?” Miles said. Colitas said “Yea?” “Do you think that sound had something to do with the place you work?” “I hope not.”////////////////////////////////////////////////////End Chapter 2///////////////////////////////////Begin Chapter 3//////////////////////Miles woke up to a faint buzzing sound. He opened his eyes and realized it was Colitas' alarm clock. He saw Colitas quickly slap the alarm and get up. Colitas went to the closet to get clothes for work later. "What time is it?" Miles mumbled. "Eight-thirty" said Colitas. Miles groaned "You know...I can't go back to sleep now, right?" Colitas said "Well... you need to learn to either wake up and go back to sleep or wake up early." Miles got up and walked down the stairs and went into the kitchen. Colitas pulled on a pair of pants and went to his sock drawer. He pulled out a small nine millimeter pistol and shoved it into his pocket. "You can never be too safe." he spoke to himself. He walked down the stairs to see Miles drinking a cup of coffee. "That never helps you know" said Colitas. "Well...its not a bad time to start" replied Miles.///////////////////Break/////////////////////
Miles sat on the couch next to Colitas and wrapped an arm around him. “What are you doing today babe?" Miles said. "Probably something after work, I guess" Colitas said. Miles stood up and looked for the remote for the TV. He found it between the couch cushions. He fell backwards onto the couch next to his friend again, and turned the TV to the food channel, Miles loved to cook, especially for Colitas. He's known him ever since the accident that brought them together. Miles mother and father died in a car accident on December first. The car that hit them was Colitas parents. Neither Miles or Colitas was in the cars. But Colitas wanted to find Miles so see what he went through after it happened. Since it took eight years, they moved in together. Miles was never able to tell anyone he was bisexual, except Colitas which he later learned he was gay. Miles quickly fell in love with him just from the way he talked and acted. "Doesn’t that look good?" said Colitas. "Yea..." responded Miles. He looked at the TV for the first time. He saw chicken grilled to a crisp drenched in teriyaki sauce. Nothing I couldn't make thought Miles. Colitas got up and said "Ok. It’s one thirty. I have to go to work." Miles stood and hugged him." I'll see you when I get back." When Colitas left Miles looked around thinking of stuff to do. "Well" Miles thought out loud “I have nothing to do till ten." Miles went into their room and pulled out a pair of jeans, a red shirt, boxers, and socks. He went into the next room and turned the hot water on. He had to stand around for about two minutes before he felt the water. He stripped off all his clothes and looked at himself in the mirror. “Not much here" he said. He felt the water again and adjusted it. He got in and began scrubbing himself down. The last thing he remembers was sitting down in the water and falling asleep///////////////////////////////End Chapter One.////////////////////////////////////// Begin Chapter Two///////////////////////////////////////// "Miles!" someone called "Miles!" Miles sat up water pelting him in the face. He quickly shut the water off "Yea!" he called. "How long have you been in there?" It was Colitas. Miles quickly got out of the shower and dried and got dressed. He opened the door. "Not long, why?" Colitas said "Well its ten thirty now..."”Whoa! I guess I dozed off then...” "Anyway" Colitas said "Something weird is going on...today at work I noticed a guy trying to bite his arm off behind one of the glass shields...Its freaking me out". Miles knew Colitas worked at a government testing site but that all. "Well" Miles said “Not much we can do here". "True" said Colitas. Miles stretched and yawned “Ok time for bed". Colitas said “Were you not asleep in the shower"? "I’m suddenly tired again, let’s go to bed." In the middle of the night a loud banging from the front door woke Miles up."Hey Colitas, do you hear that"? The banging continued. Colitas got up and opened the shotgun case in the closet. He always kept it loaded. The banging stopped right after that. Colitas stood quietly a few minutes "Ok, I think it’s gone." Colitas went to the front door, shotgun in hand "Hey, Miles" he whispered "come here and open this door." Miles counted in a whisper " three...two...one..." and quickly unlocked and opened the door in one motion. Colitas jumped through the doorway turning side to side making sure the thing that was causing the sound was gone. Colitas and Miles headed back into their bed. Miles scooted closer to Colitas. He tugged on his collar. “Hey! Cut that out” said Colitas. “Sorry” mumbled Miles.” Just try to get some sleep, ok?” said Colitas. Miles moved away from Colitas and looked at him. He looked like he was trying to piece something together. “Colitas?” Miles said. Colitas said “Yea?” “Do you think that sound had something to do with the place you work?” “I hope not.”////////////////////////////////////////////////////End Chapter 2///////////////////////////////////Begin Chapter 3//////////////////////Miles woke up to a faint buzzing sound. He opened his eyes and realized it was Colitas' alarm clock. He saw Colitas quickly slap the alarm and get up. Colitas went to the closet to get clothes for work later. "What time is it?" Miles mumbled. "Eight-thirty" said Colitas. Miles groaned "You know...I can't go back to sleep now, right?" Colitas said "Well... you need to learn to either wake up and go back to sleep or wake up early." Miles got up and walked down the stairs and went into the kitchen. Colitas pulled on a pair of pants and went to his sock drawer. He pulled out a small nine millimeter pistol and shoved it into his pocket. "You can never be too safe." he spoke to himself. He walked down the stairs to see Miles drinking a cup of coffee. "That never helps you know" said Colitas. "Well...its not a bad time to start" replied Miles.///////////////////Break/////////////////////
its better than i could do 
i still think that its very good 
