Post by E-109 Omega on Nov 2, 2004 17:28:03 GMT -5
That's right kids, I'm working on my second fanfic. It's going to be nothing like the first, the only similarity is that the Freedom Fighters have to evacuate to Mobius' moon. I'm up to Chapter 6, so I can't post the entire thing. What I will do is post the first chapter and see if people like it. If you do, then I'll post the other chapters and see if I can get this thing finished this time. Without further ado, I present the first chapter to "The Mobian Republic":
It was a hot day on New Knothole, it was near noon, and the sun hung overhead in the sky. Near it, Mobius took up a large portion of the sky. Before the Great Evacuation, Mobius had been like a green emerald in the sky. Now it was an ugly grey color, due to the excessive pollution and factories built all over the planet.
Nearly one year before, Robotnik had won a major victory over the Freedom Fighters, finally finding out the location of Knothole, the main Freedom Fighter HQ, and sent a huge army of robots to destroy the village. Unknown to him, the Freedom Fighters, under the leadership of Princess Sally Acorn, had been building a secret weapon to combat such a threat. It was a huge starship, bristling with missle launchers and EMP cannons. It was defended by a thick titanium hull and a highly experimental shielding system. They called it the Defiance, and it was going to end the Mobian War once and for all.
Robotnik's army had attacked sooner then expected, and the Defiance was quickly sent out to defend Knothole. It was a great battle, one battleship and the best Freedom Fighters fighting to save a planet, and the greatest army ever assembled to conquer it. At the end of a week, the Egg Empire army emerged victorious, having laid waste to Knothole and severely damaging the Defiance. Defeated, the Defiance, along with the entire Freedom Fighter population inside the ship, departed to the Mobian moon, which had a life-capable atmosphere, and built a sizeable colony there in only a few months. They named the capital city, and the moon, New Knothole, in honor of the village that started the Freedom Fighters at the beginning of the war.
After the colony was fully functional, they called themselves the Mobian Republic, and elected Sally Acorn as their leader. They also created a small starfleet, which they called the Republic Starfleet, of which the Defiance was the flagship. The Egg Empire was unaware of the colony, Robotnik assumed the Defiance couldn't land anywhere, and they were in orbit. He sent probes to the farthest reaches of the Mobian system, but they turned up nothing. The Republic had done a good job of destroying the probes before they detected the colony on the moon.
The Republic was silently waiting for the perfect chance to strike, little did they know that that moment was nearly upon them, and that they will start the battle for the control of Mobius, or total annhilaton.
[glow=green,2,300]Prolouge[/glow]
It was a hot day on New Knothole, it was near noon, and the sun hung overhead in the sky. Near it, Mobius took up a large portion of the sky. Before the Great Evacuation, Mobius had been like a green emerald in the sky. Now it was an ugly grey color, due to the excessive pollution and factories built all over the planet.
Nearly one year before, Robotnik had won a major victory over the Freedom Fighters, finally finding out the location of Knothole, the main Freedom Fighter HQ, and sent a huge army of robots to destroy the village. Unknown to him, the Freedom Fighters, under the leadership of Princess Sally Acorn, had been building a secret weapon to combat such a threat. It was a huge starship, bristling with missle launchers and EMP cannons. It was defended by a thick titanium hull and a highly experimental shielding system. They called it the Defiance, and it was going to end the Mobian War once and for all.
Robotnik's army had attacked sooner then expected, and the Defiance was quickly sent out to defend Knothole. It was a great battle, one battleship and the best Freedom Fighters fighting to save a planet, and the greatest army ever assembled to conquer it. At the end of a week, the Egg Empire army emerged victorious, having laid waste to Knothole and severely damaging the Defiance. Defeated, the Defiance, along with the entire Freedom Fighter population inside the ship, departed to the Mobian moon, which had a life-capable atmosphere, and built a sizeable colony there in only a few months. They named the capital city, and the moon, New Knothole, in honor of the village that started the Freedom Fighters at the beginning of the war.
After the colony was fully functional, they called themselves the Mobian Republic, and elected Sally Acorn as their leader. They also created a small starfleet, which they called the Republic Starfleet, of which the Defiance was the flagship. The Egg Empire was unaware of the colony, Robotnik assumed the Defiance couldn't land anywhere, and they were in orbit. He sent probes to the farthest reaches of the Mobian system, but they turned up nothing. The Republic had done a good job of destroying the probes before they detected the colony on the moon.
The Republic was silently waiting for the perfect chance to strike, little did they know that that moment was nearly upon them, and that they will start the battle for the control of Mobius, or total annhilaton.
very very nicely done!
