TAMB: The story

[Bleah]

Hehehe. You're probably all excited to see what the fanfic's like. Hehehe. *Crowd cheers* This fanfic also features the real Sonic characters, just to make it interesting. Okay, are you ready? Cool! Let the fanfic start! ;D

Chapter 1: The TAMB is made

One day XFox and Tails were walking in the park when Tails fell down a pit!

Tails: Help!

Xfox: *Throws a rope down the pit* Here! Catch this!

Tails: Okay! *Holds on to rope*

Xfox: *Pushes the rope up*

Tails: Thanks for saving me! Because you saved me, I'll let you make a Message Board about me only!

Xfox: YAY! *Sob* This is probably the best day of my life! B-b-b-but... what forum hoster should I use? Don't they all cost money?

Tails: Uh... no. There's one... what was it called again? Proforums? Conboards? Proboards? Oh yeah! Proboards!

Xfox: Okay... what's the URL to Proboards?

Tails: www.proboards.com

Xfox: Cool! *Goes to computer and goes to proboards.com*

Tails: *Goes to computer with him*

Xfox: So... how do I make a board?

Tails: Click on "Sign up" and then fill in the details.

Xfox: Okay. *Signs up*

Xfox: E-mail confirmiration? Okay! *Goes to E-mail inbox*

Tails: *Points to confirmiration E-mail* Look there! There it is!

Xfox: Okay! *Clicks on E-mail and goes to board* Yay! It's made! *Hugs Tails* Thank you very much! =D

What do you think?

[Lone Kitsune]

HOW can you not feel ph00lish while coming up with this stuff?!?!

And no offense, but it's a little strange. Just a LITTLE.

[bobxp]

You must of course remember that this idiot is only 7.

[NovaFox]

Normally I'd say scary, but if the author really is just 7 then okay ... There are a lot of worse things written by fursonas in that young age (Including my stories at that time)

A good tip for you ... The story itself is, if you see it in a pariodic way, okay, but you have to lengthen it up a little bit. Don't get me wrong. That does not mean you have to turn one sentence in one page, but you need to get to take your time for a story and write things more out. Exempli Gratia the scene, when Tails falls into the pit. Okay he falls down, but describe it a bit more exact so the reader can feel what Tails and X are feeling ...

Okay my 5 cents from here