Sonic Eternity - FanFic Style

[Guess Who]

This fanfic will be released chapter by chapter, in 3 parts.

Sonic Eternity
A FanFic Adaption
By Guess_Who

PART 1
TEAM SONIC
Chapter 1

A blue blur streaked through the hills alongside the beach. There was no particular reason, except for fun. That's how it usually was for Sonic the Hedgehog. That is, when he isn't out foiling the diobolical plans of the evil Dr. Eggman.
Eggman doesn't fall quite neatly into the mad scientist villian stereotype, though. He used to be quite the nice guy.
Anyway, back to our story. While our hero is racing around, he does not notice the plane behind him, nor the red figure, either.
"Hey Sonic!" came a voice from the plane.
"Tails? Knuckles?" came the reply from Sonic, "How did you find me?
Since you are reading this at a Tails message board, I don't quite need to describe Tails for you. Knuckles, though, was the red, solid, tough echidna. He was strong enough to punch through solid concrete without even breaking a sweat.
"Well, Sonic," explained Knuckles, "What else is blue, cool, and a video game character?"
"... do you want me to answer that?"
"Ok, never mind."
"Sonic, check this out! Eggman sent us a letter!" shouted Tails.

"Dear Sonic Heroes,
I have finally developed the ultimate weapon! In three days, I will..."

Tails realized this was the wrong letter, and got another.

"Dear Sonic Heroes,
I am going to let you know that the Earth is drawing to a close. You have one week to stop me. Think you can pull this off?
Your's truly,
Eggman"

"Ah, talk about cliches," Sonic added. "Well, we have one week. Let's go!"

[Guess Who]

Chapter 2

As the trio ran through the beach, they suddenly screeched to a halt. Eggman had found them, too, and had set up an army of robots to battle them. They could see Eggman in a large machine beyond the army.
"Come on, Eggman!" shouted Sonic, "are you too scared to come after us yourself?"
"Of course not," replied Eggman, "but I doubt you would survive my robots here, much less me."
Then he realized Sonic, Tails, and Knuckles were standing right in front of him, with scrap metal behind them.
"Really, Eggman?"
Then Eggman threw them off the machine he was in, and turned the machine's giant hands into rocket launchers.
"Let's see you survive this, Sonic."
The typical provocative taunt. Sonic took this challenge.
It didn't take long for the machine to be destroyed, though all three of the trio came out with some nice burns from the rockets' explosion. Eggman, as always, flew away and left the trio without any aloe vera to help those nasty burns.
Sonic, Tails, and Knuckles, chased after Eggman into the city.

[Guess Who]

Chapter 3

Our trio is now in the vast city of Taphcon, trying to find Dr. Eggman, who escaped last chapter, when suddenly Knuckles spots something in the distance.
"What's that?" he inquired.
Then they saw it. A massive, black-and red object, moving slowly out of the city. Black and red. The same colors of...
"Sonic, look out!" yelled Tails.
He ducked just in time before a fireball flew over his head.
"What was that?!"
It was a group of armed robots, ready to attack.
"Quick! Let's go!" commanded Sonic.
While Sonic was spinning through the robots, Tails taking Sonic and Knuckles and kicking them at the enemies, and Knuckles smashing the machines to a pulp, no one realized the black and red mass had turned around and had slowly flattened out.
"Sonic, long time no see."
It was Shadow!
"Shadow, what are you doing here!"
"Just here to settle a score."
"Score? What score?"
Shadow didn't reply.
"Tails, Knux, move out of the way!"
Sonic and Shadow fought around and such, but then Sonic rolled into Shadow a bit too hard, cracking him open. Wait... cracking?
"Wait a second... it's just a robot clone!"
Team Sonic wondered what was going on before they continued the search for Eggman.

[bobxp]

12 lines doesn't make a chapter.

[Guess Who]

*counts the lines*... I don't have a 12-line chapter. Unless you are using a different resolution...

[Lil Ninja]

it's good so far, but you need to keep writing more! i hate suspense in good stories. (which pretty much is any sonic-related story)