Post by Adilor on Jan 18, 2004 16:08:46 GMT -5
(Sorry about the blank posty thingy. Accidentally hit the enter key while typing the subject line.)
I've been on a major creative streak lately, so I'm writing a Fanfic. I just completed Chapter 19 today. So, here goes nothing.
In other Minds, Words, and Worlds
a Tails Fanfic my Mike Turley a.k.a. Adilor
Copyright © 2004 by Mike Turley
Chapter 1:
"Wow, it sure is peaceful up here," I thought to myself as I floated along above some patchy clouds. I took a quick glance downwards. "Hey, that must be the Grand Canyon. I'll have to visit that someday-" At this, I lost my height stability, and began a sudden, rapid descent. "Oh man, why'd I have to look down?!" I flailed my arms wildly, but nothing. As I fell faster, I became aware of a faint, rythmic buzzing noise that was becoming steadily louder. "Well, it's about time. This one might've turned out rather ugly." As the ground approached swiftly, I watched with a smug smile on my face. "Not this time. I shall live to fight another day!" Just before I hit the ground, I screamed one word. "Exit!"
I'll wait until someone replies until posting Chapter 2. I don't want to double post. And I could use some feedback for chapter names. I know it's kinda hard to figure out what's happening right now, but bear with me.
(Got tired of waiting, so I'm updating.)
Chapter 2:
I quickly jolted into a sitting position and stared at my alarm clock, which read 6:03AM. "Wow, I slept through 3 minutes of that. Crazy," I thought. I stood up and flicked the switch to the left, which thrust my world into silence once more. I sat back down on my bed and peered through the window blinds to find at least 3 new inches of snow. "Wow. If that doesn't close school, nothing will," I muttered to myself. "Hmm, my voice sounds odd. Either I'm still asleep, or I'm catching something." At this, I blindly made my way to the bathroom. Lately, I had been having some sleepwalking episodes, and, odd as it seems, I had managed to remove my clothes several times. As I walked, I noticed this had happened again. "Heh. This makes 7," I noted mentally. Once in the bathroom, I tightly shut my eyes before flicking the light switch. I turned on the water and twisted the knobs until I found my "perfect" temperature. I stepped into the shower, and immediately noticed something odd. The water pressure was low. Still not opening my eyes, since the bathroom light just so happened to be insanely bright, I groped for the knobs. However, I misjudged the distance, slipped, and crashed to the floor. After lying there for several seconds, I became aware of a strange weight on my back. I turned my head and opened my eyes slightly. And gasped at what I saw.
Hey! I need some feedback! See if you can guess what happens in Chapter 3! (As if it wasn't obvious enough)
I've been on a major creative streak lately, so I'm writing a Fanfic. I just completed Chapter 19 today. So, here goes nothing.
In other Minds, Words, and Worlds
a Tails Fanfic my Mike Turley a.k.a. Adilor
Copyright © 2004 by Mike Turley
Chapter 1:
"Wow, it sure is peaceful up here," I thought to myself as I floated along above some patchy clouds. I took a quick glance downwards. "Hey, that must be the Grand Canyon. I'll have to visit that someday-" At this, I lost my height stability, and began a sudden, rapid descent. "Oh man, why'd I have to look down?!" I flailed my arms wildly, but nothing. As I fell faster, I became aware of a faint, rythmic buzzing noise that was becoming steadily louder. "Well, it's about time. This one might've turned out rather ugly." As the ground approached swiftly, I watched with a smug smile on my face. "Not this time. I shall live to fight another day!" Just before I hit the ground, I screamed one word. "Exit!"
I'll wait until someone replies until posting Chapter 2. I don't want to double post. And I could use some feedback for chapter names. I know it's kinda hard to figure out what's happening right now, but bear with me.
(Got tired of waiting, so I'm updating.)
Chapter 2:
I quickly jolted into a sitting position and stared at my alarm clock, which read 6:03AM. "Wow, I slept through 3 minutes of that. Crazy," I thought. I stood up and flicked the switch to the left, which thrust my world into silence once more. I sat back down on my bed and peered through the window blinds to find at least 3 new inches of snow. "Wow. If that doesn't close school, nothing will," I muttered to myself. "Hmm, my voice sounds odd. Either I'm still asleep, or I'm catching something." At this, I blindly made my way to the bathroom. Lately, I had been having some sleepwalking episodes, and, odd as it seems, I had managed to remove my clothes several times. As I walked, I noticed this had happened again. "Heh. This makes 7," I noted mentally. Once in the bathroom, I tightly shut my eyes before flicking the light switch. I turned on the water and twisted the knobs until I found my "perfect" temperature. I stepped into the shower, and immediately noticed something odd. The water pressure was low. Still not opening my eyes, since the bathroom light just so happened to be insanely bright, I groped for the knobs. However, I misjudged the distance, slipped, and crashed to the floor. After lying there for several seconds, I became aware of a strange weight on my back. I turned my head and opened my eyes slightly. And gasped at what I saw.
Hey! I need some feedback! See if you can guess what happens in Chapter 3! (As if it wasn't obvious enough)