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Post by ShadowFan24 on Dec 29, 2003 0:18:36 GMT -5
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Post by MilesAttacca on Jan 12, 2004 14:42:50 GMT -5
Just took a look at your site...if you're looking for feedback I've looked at it and tried to give you good information to fix anything wrong or make anything else better. - Rather haphazard design...the columns in the pages don't really work so well to make it look good. Having things like the table which says, "Everything you need to know about Sonic and his friend, you can find here. You can get character bios, the games they appeared in. " placed around makes it look like a hodgepodge of randomly-stuck pieces. - You need some form of navigation between the pages, so that one doesn't have to hit "Back" and scroll through the main page to get to them. You could try placing a table of links on the top or to the left of the rest of the site. Take my site, Prower Power, as an example, if you like (http://www.techsonic.net/prowerpower). - The titles for each page are their URLs minus the ".html" Might want to give them actual titles. - Spelling/grammar checks would probably work wonders. I've seen sentence fragments all over, repeated parts of sentences, etc. - Make sure that the background isn't hostile and that it doesn't make it hard to read. The Sonic Heroes Info page has the classic grey-scale image of Tails tiled all over the background, but it's distracting and makes it slightly harder to read the text. I advise sticking with a solid background colour over the pages. - Keep the design of each page the same! It's distracting to have different layouts and colour choices for each link a person clicks on, and draws attention away from the design. - Correction on the Sonic Battle page ( I think ): Wasn't Sonic the Fighters a Sonic battle game? Also, teaming up two players as once: you could say that playing Sonic and Tails in Sonic 2 at the same time (with or without a 2nd person to lead Tails along) could count. Plus, three of the images on the 'Battle page don't show up. - Otherwise, I'm glad someone is putting up Sonic game info, since I myself have no real access to anything fresh. BTW, instead of using the Yahoo PageBuilder to create a site, try learning regular HTML -- it's easy, it's good for troubleshooting errors, and you can also do much more than any What-You-See-Is-What-You-Get(WYSIWYG) editors. www.htmlgoodies.com is one good place to start. You can also get a program that helps you out a bit in editing HTML code, such as one called Matrix Y2K( from www.crystalfibers.com ).
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Post by ButterflyPenguin on Jan 12, 2004 15:02:05 GMT -5
Some on the Heroes & Sonic X pages aren't working, either. That's just what I was thinking. It was a fighting game & if I'm not mistaken, I think its in 3D? Well, in spite of those few flaws, its a nice site.
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Post by ShadowFan24 on Jan 18, 2004 9:42:07 GMT -5
Yeah Yeah. I know images are down. I moved them to a subfolder, and I forget to update them. Besides, thats my school website. Hopefully, next semester, I will get webpage again, so I can begin a MegaMan Page......
Anyway, If I do get into Webpage again, I will not try to make those mistakes. Besides, I am a TERRIBLE speller. and I make typos all the time; like the is hte or teh.
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Post by DigiTails on Jan 18, 2004 17:11:37 GMT -5
[glow=purple,2,300]Nice site[/glow]
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