Post by iscin on Sept 12, 2005 14:28:33 GMT -5
Now before i put anything on you have to remeber that this is only a preview and that i will only continue with this specific work if TeenTails (the forum member), always me to, my deal is simple to him : I do the novels and the online RPG, and you do the Comics artwork sprites and other stuff, as well as being ofcourse co reator of EVERYTHING.
That said i think its time to roll the curtains for this preview enjoy
S4YO : Teen Tails
Chapter 1 The Point of NO RETURN
The day was hot, then again Tails, thinks to himself things always seem hot with Sonic around.
All of a sudden as the round the next bend they come to one of the fortress gates "Eggman must be getting pretty lax with no gaurds here", says Sonic though in his own mind Sonic knows this only means there is no doubt a trap waiting just the better to show up eggman Sonic thinks.
All three of the group, Sonic, Tails, and Knuckles, approach the gates fairly silently(you have to remeber that Knux is there lol
), and inspect the gates. The gates are roughly 12 feet vertical and 6 feet horizontal, and to left Tails, spotted a small control console.
Tails not sensing the trap walks up to the control console casualy(excuse spelling will be corrected eventually), then Tails, took out his screw driver and started to uscrew the screws in the control consoles panel when,,,,, in an instant the gates fly open at a tremendous speed and slam Tails, across the ground to almost 7 meters away where he skids to a halt, uncounscious.
Then in another brief moment a huge new robot form comes at great speed out of the fortress, and comes to a halt in front of the gates gaurding the passage.
Sonic always quick to react immediatly starts to try and distract the bot by forming a loose tornado around it, hopefully enoguh until Knuckles, can close in and deliver a fatal blow. However the combat robot was extremly short timed to react and soon came around slaming Sonic into a nearby wall with one of its telescopic appendages "Wow" Sonic shouts "Eggman must have been doing some tuning up on this one" "Well you just have a nice lie down Sonic and I'LL take care of this one" Knuckles shouts back charging forward at the upgraded mech, which then swivels round ready for Knuckles onslaught and as Knuckles is charging forward the robot suddenly disapears! "WHAT !?" shouts Knuckles at the empty space infront of the gates as he comes to a halt right where the robot WAS standing.
Knuckles hears a sound just behind him and turns around in time to face a closed fist of another of the telescopic arms, sending him reeling into the wall opisite to the one where Sonic landed, then Sonic goes back into the fray fully recovered, he hastens from one spot to another in quick succession avoiding the robots pummeling strikes which only manage to hit the barren ground. But then (as si always the tradition with Eggman apparently
), the robot spews forth a number of clustered missles, all tracking Sonic (ofcourse 
they come soaring at almost ground level all closing in Sonic in different directions. However Sonic has been in this situation before and jumps over the missles as they converge below him then talking the power ring hes been carrying performs a spin dash and heads for the robot, with an almighty CLANG Sonic hits the robot but only manages to dent its tough ceramic armour (yes i'm a brit and spell things that way :I), however Sonic was not expectinh his SD to do much damage but the missiles behing him still trying to track him Here's a blast for ya big boy Sonic thinks as he leaps of the robot and manages to get way, JUST in time as the missiles impact on the robot resulting in a blinding explosion.....
Though despite Sonics best efforts the armour was the only thing damaged, though parts of the inner workings of it are now exposed the robot is still functioning as though nothing happened to it, oh no Sonic thinks as the robot starts making its way towards him to take him out personally.
At about this time Tails, wakes up and had wakoen up just in time to see the explosion which manages to stir him more, and now he is more or less fully awake and takes in the situation in full clarity and sees that Sonic is in deep trouble, he also notices that Knuckles appears to be uncounscious and some meters away from the battle, so Tails starts hovering and starting to fly over the robot undetected as it slowly closes in on Sonic who appeared to be cornered. Then seeing the exposed parts of the robot Tails quickly dives into the exposed area of the robot and manages to throw his screwdriver into on the internal generators, which then pormptly explodes sending of a chain reaction which destroys the robot, leaving no more than wreckage where it once stood.
"That was a nifty move Tails" Sonic says to Tails "But i had the situation well in hand, you did'nt need to do that." Sonic says with an air of confidence, "Whatever you say Sonic", Tails says in reply, But i still say you needed my help Tails thinks in his own mind. And so after reviving Knuckles and checking everyone was okay Sonic, Knuckles, and Tails, go into the fortress to defeat Eggman yet AGAIN.
You have just read the first chapter from the first book of a new line of Sonic fanfiction, coming to a forum near you soon.
Copyright is me Iscin Skaidon S'jet (and if you know what ALL of those flattering names mean than are utterly sick and an incredible Geek/Nerd,,,,,,, like me :0.
This is a small preview of things to come brought to you by I.I.C.C. (Iscin's Ideas and Concepts Corperation), if you wish to know more than contact me via email : Iscin@hotmail.co.uk .
Cya and CHIL B)
Now that i put that up please let me know what you think, oh and TT do we have a deal or what?
cya m8's and have a good day night WHATEVER
And the hyperspace window closes...... for some reason
.
That said i think its time to roll the curtains for this preview enjoy
S4YO : Teen Tails
Chapter 1 The Point of NO RETURN
The day was hot, then again Tails, thinks to himself things always seem hot with Sonic around.
All of a sudden as the round the next bend they come to one of the fortress gates "Eggman must be getting pretty lax with no gaurds here", says Sonic though in his own mind Sonic knows this only means there is no doubt a trap waiting just the better to show up eggman Sonic thinks.
All three of the group, Sonic, Tails, and Knuckles, approach the gates fairly silently(you have to remeber that Knux is there lol
), and inspect the gates. The gates are roughly 12 feet vertical and 6 feet horizontal, and to left Tails, spotted a small control console.Tails not sensing the trap walks up to the control console casualy(excuse spelling will be corrected eventually
), then Tails, took out his screw driver and started to uscrew the screws in the control consoles panel when,,,,, in an instant the gates fly open at a tremendous speed and slam Tails, across the ground to almost 7 meters away where he skids to a halt, uncounscious.Then in another brief moment a huge new robot form comes at great speed out of the fortress, and comes to a halt in front of the gates gaurding the passage.
Sonic always quick to react immediatly starts to try and distract the bot by forming a loose tornado around it, hopefully enoguh until Knuckles, can close in and deliver a fatal blow. However the combat robot was extremly short timed to react and soon came around slaming Sonic into a nearby wall with one of its telescopic appendages "Wow" Sonic shouts "Eggman must have been doing some tuning up on this one" "Well you just have a nice lie down Sonic and I'LL take care of this one" Knuckles shouts back charging forward at the upgraded mech, which then swivels round ready for Knuckles onslaught and as Knuckles is charging forward the robot suddenly disapears! "WHAT !?" shouts Knuckles at the empty space infront of the gates as he comes to a halt right where the robot WAS standing.
Knuckles hears a sound just behind him and turns around in time to face a closed fist of another of the telescopic arms, sending him reeling into the wall opisite to the one where Sonic landed, then Sonic goes back into the fray fully recovered, he hastens from one spot to another in quick succession avoiding the robots pummeling strikes which only manage to hit the barren ground. But then (as si always the tradition with Eggman apparently
), the robot spews forth a number of clustered missles, all tracking Sonic (ofcourse they come soaring at almost ground level all closing in Sonic in different directions. However Sonic has been in this situation before and jumps over the missles as they converge below him then talking the power ring hes been carrying performs a spin dash and heads for the robot, with an almighty CLANG Sonic hits the robot but only manages to dent its tough ceramic armour (yes i'm a brit and spell things that way :I), however Sonic was not expectinh his SD to do much damage but the missiles behing him still trying to track him Here's a blast for ya big boy Sonic thinks as he leaps of the robot and manages to get way, JUST in time as the missiles impact on the robot resulting in a blinding explosion.....Though despite Sonics best efforts the armour was the only thing damaged, though parts of the inner workings of it are now exposed the robot is still functioning as though nothing happened to it, oh no Sonic thinks as the robot starts making its way towards him to take him out personally.
At about this time Tails, wakes up and had wakoen up just in time to see the explosion which manages to stir him more, and now he is more or less fully awake and takes in the situation in full clarity and sees that Sonic is in deep trouble, he also notices that Knuckles appears to be uncounscious and some meters away from the battle, so Tails starts hovering and starting to fly over the robot undetected as it slowly closes in on Sonic who appeared to be cornered. Then seeing the exposed parts of the robot Tails quickly dives into the exposed area of the robot and manages to throw his screwdriver into on the internal generators, which then pormptly explodes sending of a chain reaction which destroys the robot, leaving no more than wreckage where it once stood.
"That was a nifty move Tails" Sonic says to Tails "But i had the situation well in hand, you did'nt need to do that." Sonic says with an air of confidence, "Whatever you say Sonic", Tails says in reply, But i still say you needed my help Tails thinks in his own mind. And so after reviving Knuckles and checking everyone was okay Sonic, Knuckles, and Tails, go into the fortress to defeat Eggman yet AGAIN.
You have just read the first chapter from the first book of a new line of Sonic fanfiction, coming to a forum near you soon.
Copyright is me Iscin Skaidon S'jet (and if you know what ALL of those flattering names mean than are utterly sick and an incredible Geek/Nerd,,,,,,, like me :0.
This is a small preview of things to come brought to you by I.I.C.C. (Iscin's Ideas and Concepts Corperation), if you wish to know more than contact me via email : Iscin@hotmail.co.uk .
Cya and CHIL B)
Now that i put that up please let me know what you think, oh and TT do we have a deal or what?
cya m8's and have a good day night WHATEVER
And the hyperspace window closes...... for some reason
.
